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there’s a girl with black
in her eyes. It’s an
ocean, crystal blue,
or a storm, metallic gray.
it’s tar, life, love, hate

and you get my point.

she’s sometimes called
‘Punk’. She doesn’t mind.
she writes when she’s
bored, when that gets boring
she writes. She has a
lovely soul.

i’m a lover of
this poet-girl.
she completes me,
we're the two
similar ones
that attract,
positive and positive.

well, negative and
negative, respectively.
i’m a pessimist, she acts
like a punk. Is there a  
difference?

she’ll take the
words you say
and mold them
like Play-doh.
she’ll take, break and make
you feel like an idiot.
i should speak to her in
poems.

she can’t break those,
i hope.

we were fast
friends. Maybe
lightning-quick.
in less than
a mile around the
track.

i’m like the
money she could
be saving with
Geico,
clinging to
every winded branch
blowing in the storms
of her
eyes.
©2009 ~tuxisme
:icontuxisme:

Author's Comments

I need to talk to her.
I need her.
And maybe she needs me.

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:icontrauermei:
Nice poem, it's really cute. I love some of the comparisons (and the references to geico and play-doh).
:icontuxisme:
Thanks!
i love actually getting comments.

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Please ignore the boy behind the curtain.

~KabieBaby- check it out!
she made me do that...
:iconawasteof-paint:
LOVE the fifth paragraph and how you said take, break, make
and then skipped to the next line to say
you feel like an idiot.

well done!
:icontuxisme:
(my turn)
haha, really?
thanks!
i charcoled it up a few minutes ago on my old cave wall.God, i suck at spelling.

--
Please ignore the boy behind the curtain.

~KabieBaby- check it out!
she made me do that...
:iconawasteof-paint:
haha, its no big deal :)
and you're welcome!
:icontuxisme:
ditto... i think.

--
Please ignore the boy behind the curtain.

~KabieBaby- check it out!
she made me do that...
:iconazalea-path:
"I should speak to her in
Poems.

She can’t break those,
I hope."

Favorite part!
:icontuxisme:
i love it when some nice person, much like you, finds one of my poems, digs deeper into my gallery, and finds some poem that they like.

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Please ignore the boy behind the curtain.

~KabieBaby- check it out!
she made me do that...
:iconazalea-path:
I try to read more than one piece from people if they catch my eye. I usually don't have time to read everything though, and that's a shame.

Thank you for the watch! I'll definitely be adding you back!

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